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Why She Won & Got $60K For Her Essay

The exact reasons Bush W., Obama, and Trump, won the US presidential election. Learn more.

Bassey BY

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I have been a judge in a few contests. And I know it is not an easy job.

Do judges have biases? Yes, all humans do, but judges do their best to look for two things: authenticity and humanity in a product or a person.

I think the winner of the essay competition soaked her storytelling with authenticity and humanity. And she made a few mistakes.

My sister teaches Government and Economics in high school. She gives a D or F to a well-written essay. Why? She knows a parent or tutor writes an A+ essay for a D or F student. She confessed to giving extra points to the ones with mistakes but good ideas.

An experienced judge or teacher knows better.

Authenticity and Humanity:

These two things often give a grand prize winner of an essay a competitive edge over well-written articles.

Ms. America's competition rarely gives us the most beautiful woman in the world. I have no idea the definition of a beautiful woman.

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